Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in a complete, clear sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid fragments and repetition. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “so”) to connect ideas and provide a reason or short example.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there was nowhere safe to store or ride one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took public transport.

提案: Answer the question directly first (yes or no, with certainty), then explain briefly with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Avoid personal confusion and repetition; if you speak about your own experience, clearly separate it from general observations about popularity.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my city because the roads are busy and many people prefer cars or motorcycles. However, in some parks and university areas cycling is more common, especially among young people who use bikes for short trips.

× No, I didn't have a bike and I. As a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original response is fragmented and contains an extra incomplete clause "and I. As a child." This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Combine ideas into one complete sentence matching the past tense question. Suggestion: use a single clause 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' to clearly answer the examiner's question.

× I think it's just not for me until now that I'm that I'm older, I still don't know how to ride a bike there.

✓ I think biking was never for me, and even now that I'm older I still don't know how to ride a bike.

This sentence is confused and contains repetition ('that I'm that I'm') and incorrect time expressions. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correct by clarifying the time relationship: use past general statement ('was never for me') and present result ('even now... I still don't know'). Remove repeated words and place clauses in a logical order.

× For I have no reason going on.

✓ I have no reason to go out on a bike.

The phrase 'have no reason going on' misuses prepositions and verb forms; this fits incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and verb structure. Use 'reason to' + base verb for purpose ('reason to go'), and specify the action 'go out on a bike' or 'ride a bike.' Suggestion: say 'I have no reason to ride a bike' or 'I have no reason to go cycling.'