Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and add one or two specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly describe the bike or how you used it. Use a linking phrase if you add details. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six. I rode it to visit friends and practice in the park, and I remember learning to balance on it in the summer. It was a big part of my childhood because it gave me freedom and confidence.

提案: Avoid repetition and give specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, also) to make your answer coherent. Keep the response concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike programs, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for many people.

× Yes, bike bikes are quite popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.

The sentence repeats the noun 'bike' unintentionally ('bike bikes'), which is a sentence structure error causing redundancy and making the sentence ungrammatical. This fits into general sentence structure errors (ID 26). Correction: remove the duplicated word so the plural noun 'bikes' stands alone. Suggestion: read the sentence aloud or proofread to catch accidental repetitions; ensure only the correct form (singular or plural) is used according to context.