Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid hesitation sounds like “MMM.” Also keep answer under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

提案: Correct grammar and make ideas coherent with linking words. Begin with a clear opinion, then explain why with specific examples or reasons. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid vague phrases like “They used to.” Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save money and avoid traffic, especially in smaller cities.

× Yes, I think bike is in popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence has multiple problems: incorrect article and noun number and wrong verb form. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, and the verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject, so this matches a present tense/subject-verb agreement issue. Also 'in' before 'popular' is incorrect and should be removed. Suggestion: use 'bikes are popular' for general present-tense statements about a category.

× They used to.

✓ They used to.

This fragment is short and ambiguous. As written it is grammatically incomplete and unclear. If the student meant 'They used to be popular,' or 'People used to use them,' it requires an object or complement. The core issue is sentence structure and missing information rather than a plural form error alone. Suggestion: complete the thought, e.g. 'They used to be popular' or 'People used to use them.'

× They use bike as transportation.

✓ They use bikes as transportation.

When referring to a general habit, the count noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes.' Also 'as transportation' is acceptable, but 'as a means of transportation' or 'for transportation' is more natural. The main error is singular/plural mismatch. Suggestion: say 'They use bikes for transportation' or 'They use bikes as a means of transportation.'