Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümlede tekrar ve yanlış kullanım var; soruyu tekrar etmek yerine doğrudan cevap verin. Part 1 yanıtlarınızda konu cümlesiyle başlayın (evet/hatırlamıyorum vs.), ardından kısa destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı akış sağlayın ve 1-3 cümleyle sınırlayın. Örneğin geçmişten bahsederken ‘when I was a child’ ifadesini doğru yerleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

提案: Cümle yapısı bozuk ve gereksiz sözcük tekrarları var; sınavda soruyu tekrar edip düzeltilmemiş cevaplar vermek puanı düşürür. Soruyu anladığınızı gösterin ve doğrudan görüş belirtin, sonra kısa neden veya örnek ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, however, for example) kullanarak mantıklı destek verin ve 1-3 cümleyle sınırlayın.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them for short commutes because traffic is heavy. For example, many students and office workers ride bicycles to save time and money.

× Did you have a a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

There is an extra article 'a' resulting in a duplicated word 'a a'. Remove the redundant 'a' so the sentence reads correctly. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words and read aloud to catch duplication. (Error type ID:26)

× Good. Do you think bikes are you are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The phrase contains an accidental repetition 'are you are' which disrupts sentence structure. Remove the extra words 'you are' so the subject and verb remain correctly ordered ('bikes are popular'). Suggestion: simplify the clause to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' and avoid inserting conversational fillers like 'Good.' into the question. (Error type ID:26)