Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, begin with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details or reasons. Use a linking word if you add a second sentence (for example: "because" or "but"). Keep responses natural and within 3–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I remember my parents were busy and could not afford one at that time, so I mainly walked to school. However, I often borrowed bikes from neighbors during holidays.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and vocabulary issues and is somewhat repetitive. Improve by using correct noun forms and tenses, adding a brief reason or example, and using linking words (for example: "because" or "for example"). Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and good for short trips. For example, many teenagers and families often go cycling together on weekends and sometimes travel to nearby towns for bike tours.

× Yes, bike is popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

The noun 'bike' is countable and here refers to bikes in general, so it needs a plural form or a determiner. Use the plural 'bikes' to talk about the general popularity of bicycles. Suggestion: Use 'bikes are' when speaking about them in general.

× A lot of teenager go out and go biking with their friends and families.

✓ A lot of teenagers go out and go biking with their friends and family.

'A lot of' should be followed by a plural countable noun: 'teenagers' not 'teenager'. The verb must agree with the plural subject: 'go' is correct. Use 'family' as an uncountable or collective noun when referring to each person's family; 'families' could be used but 'family' is more natural here. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'a lot of' and ensure noun forms match meaning.

× They go travel to another cities and enjoy biking.

✓ They travel to other cities and enjoy biking.

The verb phrase 'go travel' is unnatural; simply use 'travel'. 'Another' should not be used before a plural noun; use 'other cities' for plural. Also, word order should be 'travel to other cities'. Suggestion: Use 'travel to other cities' instead of 'go travel to another cities'.