Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: اجابة قصيرة وواضحة لكن تحتاج الى تطوير هيكلها وتفاصيل داعمة. قلّل من الأخطاء النحوية وقدم جملة افتتاحية مباشرة ثم سبب واضح مع مثال مختصر. استخدم كلمات وصل بسيطة لتوصيل السبب.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. The main reason was that I didn’t know how to ride one, so my parents never bought one for me. For example, my friends learned at school but I always felt unsteady and gave up.

提案: الاجابة مفهومة لكن بها أخطاء نحوية وتركيب غير طبيعي. ابدأ بجملة واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل محددة مع ربط منطقي. صحّح تراكيب مثل 'almost of users' و'not a girls' واستخدم كلمات ربط مثل 'however' أو 'although'.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. However, they are used mostly by boys rather than girls, partly because of cultural expectations and safety concerns. For instance, in my neighborhood I see more boys cycling to school than girls.

× No, because I don't know how to control it.

✓ No, because I didn't know how to ride it.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't know' is present tense; change to 'didn't know'. Also 'control it' is unnatural for riding a bike; use 'ride it'. Suggestion: Use past simple for past situations and choose appropriate verbs (ride a bike).

× Yes they are popular but almost of users being boys not a girls so yeah.

✓ Yes, they are popular, but most users are boys, not girls.

The original sentence has multiple structure errors: missing commas, incorrect phrase 'almost of users being', wrong verb form 'being' and incorrect article 'a girls'. Fix by using 'most users are boys, not girls' with proper subject-verb agreement and plural nouns. Suggestion: Use simple, clear subject-verb structures ('most users are boys') and correct plural nouns without unnecessary articles.