Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is brief and direct, which is good, but it's too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, provide a topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike it was, who taught you to ride, or a short memory). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and my father taught me to ride it in our neighborhood park. As a result, I used to ride it almost every afternoon with my friends.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar, repetition, and lacks specific details. Improve by correcting grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoiding repetition, and adding a specific reason or example (e.g., traffic, cost, or recent growth in cycling). Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in the Philippines because many people prefer them to avoid traffic and save money. For example, during rush hour you can often see commuters and delivery riders using bikes or e-bikes to get around the city more quickly.

× Yeah, it is very popular cause most people here in the Philippines use bike for their daily daily use of transportation.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular because most people here in the Philippines use bikes for their daily transportation.

The subject refers to 'bikes' (plural), so the verb and pronoun must be plural ('they are' not 'it is'). 'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Bike' should be plural to match 'most people' using them, and 'daily daily use of transportation' is redundant and awkward; use 'daily transportation' or 'daily use of transportation'. Also change 'use bike' to 'use bikes' for subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.