Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a past-tense sentence that explains what kind of bike it was, how often you used it, or a short memory. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me when I was six. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, and I remember practicing until I could ride without the training wheels.

提案: Correct misunderstandings and answer directly. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons or observations using linking words (e.g., "however", "because", "for example"). Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences maximum.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer cars or motorcycles because public transport and roads are designed for motor vehicles, so I rarely see bikes on the street. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities due to bike-sharing schemes and new bike lanes.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student was answering a yes/no question in the past simple (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). In English, short answers to 'Did' questions use the auxiliary did + base verb (did/do/didn't), or simply 'Yes, I did.' Using 'I had' is not the usual short response form here and can sound unnatural. Suggestion: answer past simple yes/no questions with 'Yes, I did' or provide a full sentence such as 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Your spike is very popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

The student used 'Your spike', which is incorrect and unclear. The intended subject is likely 'bikes'. This is a pronoun/noun choice error. Replace the incorrect phrase with the correct noun. Also ensure number agreement: 'Bikes are' for plural.

× I can't see many bikes in in the street.

✓ I can't see many bikes in the street.

There is a duplication of the preposition 'in' ('in in'), which is a sentence structure/typing error. Remove the extra 'in' to form the correct prepositional phrase 'in the street.' Additionally, 'in the street' is natural for general observation; 'on the street' is also possible depending on context. Suggestion: proofread to avoid duplicated words and choose the appropriate preposition ('in the street' or 'on the street').