Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle tekrarı ve sorunun yeniden edilmesi büyük hata. Doğrudan soruya cevap vermeli, bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp gerekirse kısa destekleyici detay vermelisin. Cevaplar doğal olmalı, gereksiz tekrar ve sınırlı içerikten kaçınmalısın. Ayrıca 1-3 kısa cümleyle kişisel deneyim ve bir bağlaç kullan (ör. because, so) ekle.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to learn balance and exercise. It was my favorite toy, so I rode it every afternoon after school.

提案: Cevap sırasında kelime hatası ve soruyu yanlış anlama var. Önce soruyu anlayıp doğrudan yanıtla, ardından kısa gerekçe veya bir örnek ver. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, therefore) kullanarak akışı geliştir. 1-3 cümle yeterli ve özgün kelime seçimine dikkat et.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and many students commuting to school by bike.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeated the question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure and pragmatics issue rather than pure grammar; to fit the past tense question 'Did you have...', use past simple 'I had'. Improve by directly answering questions: use 'Yes, I had...' or 'No, I didn't have...'.

× Do you think spikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'spikes' instead of 'bikes', which is a vocabulary/word choice mistake and changes the meaning. The examiner asked about 'bikes' (bicycles). Correct by using the intended noun 'bikes'. Also ensure the present simple question remains unchanged when repeating the question or answering it; to answer use 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think so.'.