Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words if adding details. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe while I learned, and by the time I was nine I could ride long distances without any help.

提案: Again, you only repeated the question. Provide a clear opinion followed by specific reasons or examples, using linking words (for example, because, and, therefore). Aim for 2–4 sentences that are natural and relevant.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and help avoid traffic, and some cities have bike-share programs which make cycling more convenient.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original is a repetition of the examiner's question rather than an answer; this is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Provide a complete declarative answer in past tense to match the question. Use 'had' for past possession and include the subject 'I' and auxiliary omitted in the student's repeated question. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' as appropriate.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original repeats the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To answer, include a clear subject and verb and keep the present simple tense to match 'do you think'. Use 'I think' followed by the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: say 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' as appropriate.