Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap açık ama yineleyici ve doğallıktan uzak. Konuya doğrudan kısa bir giriş yapıp ardından bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Bağlaç kullanarak neden sevdiğinizi veya bisikletle ilgili bir anı ekleyin. Cümle sayısını 3–4 cümleyle sınırlayın ve daha uygun kelime seçimi (ör. “own bike”, “ride”, “favorite”) kullanın.

例: Yes, I did — I had my own bike as a child and I loved riding it. I used to cycle to my friend’s house every weekend, which made it special to me. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I felt confident and independent.

提案: Cevap net ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık açısından geliştirilebilir. Konuyu doğrudan cevaplayın, sonra örnek veya neden verin; bağlaçlar (e.g. “especially”, “because”, “for example”) kullanarak mantıklı bir akış oluşturun. Ayrıca daha doğru kelime kullanımı için “for transportation” veya “as a means of transport” deyimlerini tercih edin ve bir istatistik veya gözlemsel örnek ekleyin.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light. For example, many people cycle to work or to the market because it’s cheap and convenient. In larger cities, cycling is also growing due to improved bike lanes and environmental awareness.

× Bicycles are very popular in my country and especially small cities.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in small cities.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'in' before 'small cities' to indicate location. Add a comma before 'especially' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'especially in small cities' to correctly show where bicycles are most popular. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Many people prefer to use their own bicycle to transportation.

✓ Many people prefer to use their own bicycle for transportation.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'prefer ... to'. Here the intended meaning is purpose, so 'for' is appropriate: 'for transportation'. Also note a possible noun number issue: 'their own bicycles' could be more natural if referring to individuals owning bicycles. Suggestion: use 'for transportation' or 'use their own bicycles for transportation.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Many people prefer to use their own bicycle for transportation.

✓ Many people prefer to use their own bicycles for transportation.

When referring to many people, the possessed noun should normally be plural ('bicycles') to match the plural subject. Using the plural makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: use 'their own bicycles' when the subject is plural. Grammar problem type ID: 1