Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan ve kısa; ancak zaman uyumunu düzeltmeli, daha fazla ayrıntı eklemeli ve bağlantı ifadeleri kullanmalısınız. Örneğin geçmişten bahsederken 'had' kullanılmalı, bisikletten ne zaman/nerede/kimle veya neden bahsedilebilir. Cevabı 2-4 cümleye genişleterek doğal ve etkili bir yapı kurun.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more confident and active.

提案: Cevap kısa ve net ama destekleyici detaylar eksik; görüşünüzü gerekçelendirin ve örnek veya karşılaştırma ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, however) kullanarak mantıklı akış sağlayın. Ayrıca kesinlikten kaçınmak için 'I don't think so' yerine 'I don't think they are very popular' gibi ifade kullanın.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because public transport is more convenient for most people. For example, in cities many commuters prefer buses or cars due to long distances and lack of safe cycling lanes.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student's response 'Yes, I have.' uses present perfect, which does not match the past time frame. Use past simple 'did' for a short affirmative answer about a past possession: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: answer with past simple forms for past-time questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

The question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is in the present simple. The response 'I don't think so.' is grammatically correct and appropriately uses present simple negative. No correction needed. Suggestion: if you want to expand, give a reason, e.g., 'I don't think so because...'. This explanation is in English.