Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the response natural and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail using a linking word. For example, use past tense consistently and replace 'just' with 'never' or clarify timing. Avoid redundancy and keep it to 1–3 sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my friend's bike to ride around the neighborhood on weekends.

提案: Use a more natural expression and provide a specific reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a supporting detail introduced by a linking word like 'because' or 'for example.' Avoid awkward phrases such as 'too much popular.'

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to avoid traffic. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and many commuters cycling to work.

× No, I just have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I only had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense ('have') with past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use the past simple 'had' for a completed action in the past. Also 'just' is better replaced with 'only' for clarity in this context. Suggestion: use 'had' and 'only' for a clear past statement.'

× Yes, bikes are too much popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The phrase 'too much popular' is ungrammatical. English uses adverbs like 'very' or the structure 'too popular' (which implies excess). Use 'very popular' to express high popularity. Suggestion: replace 'too much popular' with 'very popular' or 'quite popular' depending on degree.'