Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question (Yes or No), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, say whether you had a bike, mention who gave it to you or how often you used it, and finish with a short reason or memory.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived close to the school. However, I remember borrowing my friend’s bike sometimes on weekends, which was great fun.

提案: Your answer is not relevant to the question and contains nonsensical details. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes or No), then support it with specific reasons or examples and use linking words (for example, because, so, however). Keep it concise and use vocabulary relevant to popularity and transport.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so biking is a convenient and affordable option for daily commuting.

× No one has not taken back crime.

✓ No, I did not have a bike.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and negation and does not answer the question. This is a pronoun and sentence-structure error: 'No one' is inappropriate for 'I' and 'has not taken back crime' is unrelated and ungrammatical. Correction uses the appropriate subject pronoun 'I' and simple past tense 'did not have' to match the examiner's past-tense question. Suggestion: use the correct subject ('I') and negate the past-tense verb with 'did not' for simple past (e.g., 'I did not have a bike').

× My country makes famous in 220 falser.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains meaningless fragments ('220 falser') and a verb phrase that doesn't convey the intended idea. This is a sentence structure error: the speaker likely meant to say that bikes are popular or well-known. Correction uses a clear subject 'Bicycles' and a present-tense verb 'are' with the adjective 'popular' to answer the present-tense question. Suggestion: express the intended meaning directly using a clear subject and adjective (e.g., 'Bicycles are very popular in my country').