Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn mắc lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng cơ bản khiến câu không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ nếu nói về quá khứ, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản nhưng chính xác, ví dụ: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Sau đó bổ sung 1-2 câu chi tiết (mô tả, lý do thích, kỷ niệm) dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “and” để câu mạch lạc. Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school every day because my home was quite close. It was a small red bicycle and I remember feeling very independent when I rode it.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi chọn từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích cụ thể với lý do, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “popular”, “common”, “mainly used for” và liên từ như “because” hoặc “for example”. Tránh lỗi chính tả và lặp từ. Giữ 2-3 câu rõ ràng.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and shopkeepers often cycle to work or school.

× Yes, I have a bar when you were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used incorrect pronouns and incorrect verb tense. The question asked about the past (when you were a child), so the past tense 'had' is required instead of 'have'. 'You' was mistakenly used instead of 'I', and 'bar' appears to be a wrong word for 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past possession and double-check nouns (bike) and pronouns (I) to match the speaker. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, and I I think by a Buffalo in your country.

✓ Yes, and I think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence has multiple issues: repeated word 'I I', wrong verb choice 'by', incorrect noun 'Buffalo', and unnatural reference 'in your country' when answering about the student's country. The examiner asked about bikes in the student's country, so use 'bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: remove duplicate words, choose the correct verb ('are' for plural subject), correct noun ('bikes'), and use the correct possessive/reference ('my country'). Grammar problem type ID:26