Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Вы не ответили на вопрос экзаменатора и вместо этого задали встречный вопрос, что нарушает базовую структуру ответа. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос с вводным предложением и, при необходимости, добавить 1–2 поддерживающих детали, используя связки. Также следите за тем, чтобы ваши ответы были релевантными и естественными. Примерный план: краткий прямой ответ + причина или пример.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

提案: Вы повторили вопрос экзаменатора вместо того, чтобы ответить. Это показывает отсутствие содержания и несоблюдение инструкции отвечать прямо. Дайте ясный тезис, добавьте конкретную причину или пример и используйте связку (например, "because" или "however") для связности. Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular, especially in cities where people use them to avoid traffic, because they are inexpensive and good for short commutes.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question with a different noun, creating a sentence that does not answer the question. This is a sentence structure and relevance error: the response should be a declarative past-tense sentence answering whether they had a bike. Use past simple (had) to match the question's past tense. Suggestion: reply directly to the question, for example 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. The correct response should be a present-tense declarative sentence using 'think' to express current opinion. Maintain subject-verb agreement and present simple tense: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: give a direct answer and, if possible, add a reason: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.'