Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and at least one supporting detail. Mention when you had the bike, what kind it was, and a short memory or reason to make the response more natural and informative. Use a linking word if you add another sentence (e.g., "because", "and", "so"). Keep it to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because there were few hills nearby, I felt confident riding it every day after school. It became my favorite way to play with friends.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence and follow with specific supporting details and a linking word to explain why they are popular. Mention examples (urban commuting, sport, children's use) and briefly compare to other transport if relevant. Keep responses natural and concise (2–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students and office workers often cycle to school or work, and there are also many cycling clubs for sport on weekends. As a result, bike lanes and rental schemes are common in cities.

× Yes, it's very popular.

✓ Yes, they're very popular.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student replied with 'it's' which is singular (it is) and does not agree with the plural subject. This is a subject-verb agreement/third person singular error. Use the plural pronoun and verb form: 'they're' (they are) to match 'bikes'. Suggestion: identify the subject (bikes) and make the pronoun and verb agree in number by using 'they are' for plural references.