Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答案过于简短，缺乏细节和自然延展。建议按“主题句 + 支持细节（例如什么时候、有哪种自行车、与谁一起骑、为什么喜欢等）”来扩展，同时使用连接词让回答更连贯。保持不超过5句。举例要具体且自然。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my older brother around the neighborhood. The bike had a basket and training wheels at first, but I removed them after a few months when I felt more confident. Riding helped me feel independent and I often rode to the nearby park on weekends.

提案: 回答太简短且笼统，缺少具体原因或例子。建议先给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体说明原因（如交通、环保、运动或城市设施等）并举例或比较，使用连接词使结构清晰。控制在5句内。

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. In big cities you can see bike-sharing schemes and dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling convenient and safe. For example, my colleague cycles to work every day to avoid traffic and stay fit.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

对该句无语法错误。回答正确地使用了过去时来回应“Did you have...?”的问题，简短肯定回答结构为“Yes, I did.”是恰当的。无需修改。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

对该句无语法错误。回答正确地使用了一般现在时来回应“Do you think...?”的问题，简短肯定回答结构为“Yes, I do.”是恰当的。无需修改。