Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않았습니다. 파트1에서는 질문에 대한 명확한 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 필요하면 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적인 세부사항(예: 언제부터, 누구와 타곤 했는지, 어떤 종류였는지)을 덧붙여야 합니다. 또한 답변은 자연스럽고 적절한 연결어(예: yes/no 뒤에 because, when, often 등)를 사용해 확장하세요. 한 답변은 최대 5문장으로 유지하세요.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. I got my first bicycle when I was ten, and it was a small red one with training wheels. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood most afternoons, which helped me become more independent.

提案: 단답형 응답만으로는 점수를 줄 수 없습니다. 의견을 묻는 질문에는 주제문(예: Yes, I think so)과 그 이유를 하나 이상 구체적으로 제시하세요. 이유에는 통계적 근거나 개인적 경험, 비교 등 구체적인 내용이 포함되어야 대화가 풍부해집니다. 연결어(e.g., because, so, therefore)를 사용해 논리적으로 전개하세요.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, cities have built bike lanes and rental schemes, so commuting by bike has become more convenient and common.

× Hi.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply 'Hi.' is not an appropriate answer to the examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The error falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26) because the response lacks the required verb and information to form a complete answer. To correct it, provide a short past-tense response that matches the question's auxiliary verb 'did' (use 'did' + subject + base verb) and include relevant details if needed. For example, 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.' This uses past simple correctly: 'did' for the auxiliary and 'had' as the past form of 'have.'

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply 'Yes.' is too short and does not fully address the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response omits the verb phrase and lacks clarity. A better answer includes the modal or verb that reflects opinion (e.g., 'I think') and matches the present simple question. For example, 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' This gives a complete sentence with subject + verb and makes the opinion explicit. You can expand further with reasons (e.g., 'because many people use them for commuting').