Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, use a clear topic sentence and add 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep within 1–3 sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention who it belonged to or how often you used it, and include a brief reason or memory to make it natural.

例: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day, which helped me feel independent and confident.

提案: Respond directly with a clear statement, correct grammar, and provide specific supporting details using linking words. Mention reasons or examples (e.g., transport, exercise, environment) to make your answer more informative and natural. Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic, and cycling is also encouraged for health and environmental reasons.

× Yes, in our country the buy are popular.

✓ Yes, in our country bikes are popular.

The sentence uses the incorrect word 'buy' instead of the plural noun 'bikes'. This is an incorrect use of a pronoun/word choice leading to a noun error. Replace 'the buy' with 'bikes' to provide the correct plural noun and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'are'. Suggestion: use the plural noun that matches the topic (bikes) and keep the verb 'are' for plural subjects.