Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Вы просто повторили вопрос экзаменатора вместо того, чтобы отвечать. Это не демонстрирует владение языком, структуру ответа или содержание. Нужны: прямая тема в предложении, дополнительная конкретная деталь (например, когда вы получили велосипед, кто дал, как часто катались) и связки. Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений и используйте разные структуры (простое past + past continuous/phrases).

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday present from my parents, and I rode it almost every afternoon to visit friends. Because the roads near our house were quiet, I felt safe practicing there until I could ride confidently.

提案: Опять же вы повторили вопрос вместо ответа. Чтобы улучшить оценку, ответьте прямо (Yes/No/It depends), добавьте причины и конкретные примеры, используя связки (because, however, for example). Постарайтесь дать одну-две конкретные детали: статистика, места, группы людей, которые чаще всего используют велосипеды. Ответ должен быть естественным и не многословным (не более 4 предложений).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities and among students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to university or work during rush hour, although car ownership has grown in recent years which limits cycling in some areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26): the reply should be a complete declarative sentence containing a subject and a verb. Use past simple to match the question: 'I had' not 'I have'. Provide additional detail if possible (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red one.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. This is classified as a present tense issue (ID 6) because the expected answer should use the present simple tense to express current opinion: 'I think' rather than repeating the question form. A full answer should include a subject and verb and optionally reasons (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.').