Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense and expand briefly with one or two specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add a supporting detail and a linking word if needed. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend.

提案: Give a clear opinion and avoid contradicting yourself. Use one sentence for your direct answer and one or two sentences to support it with specific reasons or examples and linking words (for example, because, so, however).

例: No, I don't think they are very popular. Although some people use bikes in cities for short trips, most people prefer cars because public transport and road safety are limited in many areas.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student responded with 'Yes, I have,' which uses the present perfect and does not match the past-time context. Use the simple past 'did' to agree with the past-tense question. Suggestion: answer past-tense yes/no questions with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, I don't think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student replied 'Yes, I don't think so,' which is contradictory and uses a negative with 'don't' that conflicts with 'Yes.' The correct affirmative response is 'Yes, I think so.' If the student meant disagreement, they should say 'No, I don't think so.' Suggestion: match the polarity of the short response to 'Yes' or 'No' and use simple present for general beliefs (I think).