Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct and natural but too short. Provide a brief topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., when you got the bike, who gave it to you, how you used it) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red one that my parents gave me for my birthday. Because it was lightweight, I used it to visit friends and ride to school on weekends.

提案: Your answer repeats information and has small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the country, and add specific reasons and examples using linking words (e.g., because, therefore, for example). Use plural form 'bikes' and combine short sentences to sound more natural. Limit to up to five sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Nigeria because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel in crowded cities. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to get to work quickly, and small motorcycle taxis are common for short trips in towns.

× Yes, bike is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The student omitted the plural marker and the correct article/number form. In this context the speaker talks about bikes in general, so a plural noun without 'the' is required: 'bikes are'. Also change verb to plural agreement 'are'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements (bikes are).

× People in Nigeria like to use bike to go to work.

✓ People in Nigeria like to use bikes to go to work.

The noun 'bike' should be plural to match the general meaning and the verb 'use' with plural object. Using singular 'bike' is ungrammatical here. Suggestion: make the object plural when referring to the activity in general (use bikes).

× They also use bike to go to different places.

✓ They also use bikes to go to different places.

Same issue: 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when referring to people using them generally. Keep verb 'use' and make the noun plural. Suggestion: say 'use bikes' for general habits.