Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接但过于简短，未遵循“基本结构”提供主题句后补充细节。建议在肯定回答后添加一到两句具体细节，如何时拥有、谁给的、骑车的回忆或频率，并使用连接词使答案更连贯。建议长度控制在3–4句内，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I did. I got a red bike when I was eight from my parents, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because the roads were quiet, I felt very free and confident riding with my friends.

提案: 回答包含观点和个人例子，但缺少更具体的证据或比较来支持观点。建议先给出简明主题句表示看法，然后用连接词补充统计、常见用途或和其他交通方式的比较（例如通勤、休闲、环保原因），并保持总句数不超过4–5句。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and short trips. For example, I ride my bike to work every day since it is faster than driving in traffic and more environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该句为回答过去时的简短回答，使用助动词 did 表示过去时，语法正确，无需修改。

× Of course I think so.

✓ Of course I think so.

该句为一般现在时表达观点，结构正确，语法无误。

× I ride my bike to work every day.

✓ I ride my bike to work every day.

该句使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，主语 I 与动词 ride 在现在时下无需加 -s，语法正确。