Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态和语法不正确，信息也过于简短。应直接用过去时并给出一到两句具体细节（例如谁送的、多久用、骑车的记忆），并使用连接词使表达更连贯。回答长度控制在3-5句内。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and my parents bought it for my birthday. I rode it almost every day after school, which helped me build confidence and stay active.

提案: 回答过于简短且缺乏具体说明。应给出观点并用一到两条具体理由或例子支持（如通勤、健身、城市基础设施），使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example”。保持3-5句。

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and rental services that make cycling convenient.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was 7.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 7.

句子中描述的是过去发生的事实（“我7岁时有辆自行车”），应使用过去时态。原句使用现在时的“have”与时间状语“when I was 7”时态不一致。改为过去式“had”以保持时态一致性。建议：遇到表示过去时间的时间状语（如 when I was ... / last year / in 2010 等），把谓语动词改为过去时。