Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha açık ve doğal olmalı; zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (geçmiş için 'had' kullanın). Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kullanın, gerekirse bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin, bisikletin kimden alınmış, ne zaman veya nasıl kullanıldığı gibi somut bilgi verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri mantıksal şekilde bağlayın ve fazla tekrar veya anlamsız ifadelerden kaçının.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride to my friend's house and to the park.

提案: Cevap daha düzenli ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler ('uh') azaltılmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan görüşünüzü belirtin, sonra bir veya iki spesifik gerekçe veya örnek verin (örneğin ulaşım, spor, maliyet). Bağlaçlarla fikirlerinizi bağlayın ve doğru fiil zaman/uyumuna dikkat edin.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily transportation. For example, in cities many commuters prefer bicycles since they are cheap, eco-friendly and often faster than cars during rush hour.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense 'had' instead of the present 'have'. Use past simple for completed states in the past. Suggestion: use 'had' when referring to past possession.

× In children, the other eight children.

✓ I was one of nine children.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and lacks proper sentence structure and meaning. The student likely wanted to say they were one of nine siblings. Use a clear subject and predicate: 'I was one of nine children.' Suggestion: form a complete sentence with subject + verb + complement to express family size.

× Uh, yes, my country, in my country is uh, bike very important.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are very important.

The sentence misuses word order and tense. To describe a general truth about the present, use the present simple: 'bikes are'. Also use plural 'bikes' for general statements. Suggestion: use 'In my country, bikes are very important.'

× Uh, everybody take in bike.

✓ Everybody takes the bike/Everybody rides a bike.

With the singular indefinite subject 'everybody' you must use third person singular verb form 'takes' or 'rides'. The phrase 'take in bike' is incorrect; use 'take a bike', 'ride a bike', or 'use bikes'. Suggestion: 'Everybody rides a bike.'