Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan; ancak daha fazla ayrıntı ekleyerek ve doğal bir akış sağlayarak puan artırılabilir. Doğru zaman ve sahiplik ifadeleri kullanın (örn. "When I was a child, I had a red bike"). Bağlaçlarla (because, so, and) ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Cümleleri 2–4 cümle arasında tutun ve gereksiz tekrar yapmayın.

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small red bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it to the park every weekend because there was a safe cycling path nearby. It helped me become more confident and active.

提案: Cümlede dilbilgisi hatası ve belirsizlik var; ayrıca açıklama yok. "My bikes is" yanlış; tekil/çoğul ve iyelik uyumuna dikkat edin. Doğru ve genişletilmiş cevap verin, neden popüler olduklarını veya olmadıklarını belirtin ve spesifik örnekler kullanın. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı destek verin ve 2–4 cümle arasında kalın.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short journeys and exercise because traffic can be heavy and cycling is affordable. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes that make cycling convenient.

× Yes, my bikes is popular.

✓ Yes, my bike is popular.

The subject 'my bikes' is plural while the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Change either subject or verb to match number. In this context the student likely means a single bike, so use 'my bike is popular'. If they meant multiple bikes, use 'my bikes are popular'. Also consider the intended meaning: to answer 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' a more natural reply would be 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.'