Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two concise supporting details (age, who gave it to you, how often you used it). Use linking words like “and” or “when” for coherence. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about six years old. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my birthday, and I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood every weekend.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner rather than giving an opinion. To improve, give a clear direct answer (yes/no/partly), then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however” to connect ideas. Aim for 2–3 sentences with relevant vocabulary (commute, environment, infrastructure).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in many cities because they are cheap and help avoid traffic. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and there are dedicated bike lanes in downtown areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26) because the response lacks a main verb conveying the student's experience. Correct answer should be a past-tense affirmative statement matching the question's past tense. Use 'had' (past of 'have') and include subject 'I' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: answer directly using past tense, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26) because the response does not provide an opinion as required by the question. The correction keeps present simple tense to match the question and includes the subject 'I' to give a proper answer. Suggestion: give a direct opinion using present simple, for example 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'