Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is confused and repeats words; it does not directly respond to the question. Keep answers concise, start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repeating the examiner's words and correct word order. For example, begin with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add a specific detail like who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a short memory.

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day during summer. I even remember learning to balance on it in our local park.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repeats the examiner's question. To improve, answer directly with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and one brief example. Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make your response coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and workers commute by bicycle.

× Did you have a bath when you did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence repeats and mixes two questions and lacks a clear structure. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The student should answer the examiner's question using a simple past tense statement matching the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. Use 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' or 'Yes, I did.' as appropriate. Keep one clause, use the correct subject and auxiliary 'did' in negative form for simple past, and avoid repeating the question within the answer. Suggestion: Form a single, complete sentence that directly answers the question, using simple past ('did'/'didn't') and placing the subject before the verb: 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think, do you do you think back are the popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The original sentence is highly jumbled and repeats fragments, causing a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner's question requires a clear present simple question. The correct form is 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' which uses the auxiliary 'do' + subject 'you' + base verb 'think', followed by the clause 'bikes are popular in your country.' Suggestion: Remove repeated words and arrange elements in standard question order: auxiliary + subject + verb, then the noun phrase and complement: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. If answering, use 'Yes, I think so.' or 'No, I don't think so.'