Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要注意时态一致与语法准确，并且可以增加细节使内容更具体和自然。建议将现在时改为过去时（I had），把小细节补充进来（比如自行车的颜色、距离或心情），并使用连接词使句子更流畅。例如先给出主题句，然后加一句或两句支持细节。注意总句数不超过5句。

例: Yes, I had a small blue bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to school every day because our house was only about a ten-minute ride away. Sometimes I raced with my friends on the way and felt really proud whenever I managed to keep up.

提案: 回答太简短且不够连贯，语法和表达有小错误（例如 parents' car）。建议先给出总体评价，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点，使用连接词如 "because" 或 "however"。可以对不同群体（上班族、学生、城市与乡村）做简单比较，使答案更完整。

例: Not really; bicycles aren't very popular in my city because many people prefer to drive to work due to long distances and convenient public transport. However, in some rural areas or among students who live nearby, cycling is still fairly common because it's cheap and healthy.

× Yes, sure. I have a little bicycle when I was a child and I rode it to my school every day.

✓ Yes, sure. I had a little bicycle when I was a child and I rode it to my school every day.

句中“when I was a child”明确表示过去时间，主句也应使用过去时。原句中使用现在时态“I have”与时间状语不一致，造成时态错误。建议将“I have”改为过去时“had”，确保时态一致。

× No. Many people drive to their company and some students go to school by their parents car.

✓ No. Many people drive to their company, and some students go to school by their parents' car.

“parents car”缺少所有格标记，应写作“parents' car”表示“父母的车”。另外在“drive to their company”和后半句之间加逗号更符合书面表达。建议在名词所有者为复数时使用撇号表示所有格：parents' car。