Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên sửa ngữ pháp thời quá khứ và phát âm một số từ. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ (I had a bike), tiếp theo cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ (mô tả loại xe, tần suất sử dụng, kỷ niệm) sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lỗi chính tả/phonetic (ví dụ "pie" phải là "bike"). Giữ câu không quá dài, tối đa 3–4 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, and I rode it to school almost every day. I remember learning to ride it in my neighborhood park, which was a lot of fun.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp số nhiều và trật tự từ, dùng thì phù hợp và liên từ để diễn đạt rõ ràng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes, I think so) rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (environmental, cheap, common for children) và ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Tránh filler như "uh" và sai ngữ pháp như "every children" (phải là "most children" hoặc "every child").

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable and practical for short trips, so many people use them for commuting and children for playing. For example, in my neighborhood most children own a bicycle and use it to visit friends or go to school.

× Yes, I have. I have a pie when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'have' incorrectly to refer to a past possession. For past actions or possessions, use the past simple 'did' for short answers and 'had' for the main verb. Also 'pie' is likely a typo for 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did.' for the short answer and 'I had a bike when I was a child.' for the full sentence.

× Yes, I think by are popular in my country when I choose when I was child.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country now, compared to when I was a child.

Multiple problems: 'by' is a typo for 'bikes'; subject 'bikes' (plural) requires 'are' which is correct but placement and tense are wrong. The phrase 'when I choose when I was child' is ungrammatical. The student likely wants to compare present popularity with the past, so use 'now' and 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: say 'I think bikes are popular in my country now, compared to when I was a child.'

× Uh, every children in my country have a bike.

✓ Uh, every child in my country has a bike.

'Every' must be followed by a singular noun ('child'), not a plural ('children'). Also with singular subject 'every child', the verb must be third person singular 'has', not 'have'. Suggestion: use 'every child has' or 'all children have' depending on meaning.