Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short, contains a grammar mistake (use past tense), and lacks supporting details. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add 1–2 specific details or a brief reason. Use linking words if you add extra information.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by, and my parents preferred me to ride with them in the car for safety reasons.

提案: Your answer is informal, hesitant and has grammar errors (singular/plural and word order). Organize your response: give a topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / for instance). Reduce fillers and use correct noun forms.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many young people prefer cycling for short trips because it is cheap and good exercise, and cities have more bike lanes now, which makes cycling more convenient.

× No, I have no bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect for a past-time question. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' to match the time reference.

× I think bike is popular in my, uh, in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally, and the article is not needed with a plural. Also 'in my, uh, in my country' is redundant; remove duplication. Suggestion: use plural noun for general statements: 'bikes are popular in my country.'

× Umm, because, uh, young people, they like more bike.

✓ Umm, because young people like bikes more.

This sentence has redundancy ('young people, they') and incorrect use of 'more' with a singular noun. For comparative emphasis, place 'more' after the verb and use plural 'bikes'. Also drop the redundant pronoun: 'young people like bikes more.' Suggestion: use concise structure and correct plural form and word order.