Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và dùng thì sai. Cần trả lời trực tiếp về việc sở hữu xe đạp trong quá khứ, dùng thì quá khứ (e.g., "I had"), và tránh lặp lại, cung cấp 1–3 câu bổ sung cụ thể. Ví dụ cần nêu thời gian, lý do, hoặc kỷ niệm ngắn.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a small red bike that my parents bought for me so I could ride to my friend’s house. I remember learning to balance on it in our neighborhood park.

提案: Bạn đọc nhầm từ và chưa trả lời câu hỏi ý nghĩa. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/maybe) và giải thích với lí do cụ thể, dùng linking words để mạch lạc (e.g., 'because', 'however'), và giữ độ dài hợp lý (1–3 câu bổ sung).

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas, because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. However, in big cities many people prefer motorbikes due to longer distances and traffic.

× Do you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used present tense 'do you have' with a past time marker 'when you were a child', which is incorrect. Also the student changed the noun 'bike' to 'bag', which does not match the examiner's question. Use past simple 'did you have' for past situations and keep the original noun if answering the same question. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past (Did + subject + base verb).

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys', which is a verb form or misspelling, instead of the plural noun 'bikes'. The examiner's question is in present tense about general popularity; 'Do you think' + plural noun 'bikes' is correct. Suggestion: check spelling and use the correct plural noun form when referring to general objects (bike → bikes).