Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nếu cần bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (tối đa 5 câu tổng cộng). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý nếu có bổ sung. Ví dụ cụ thể: nói rõ có hay không, miêu tả ngắn về chiếc xe, thời gian/độ tuổi, và cảm xúc hoặc lý do.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my sixth birthday. I used to ride it around our neighborhood almost every day, which made me feel very independent. Because of that bike I became more confident riding on streets later.

提案: Bạn tiếp tục lặp lại câu hỏi và còn mắc lỗi nghe/viết (“bites” thay vì “bikes”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung 1–2 lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng từ vựng liên quan (commute, environment, exercise, cycling lanes) và liên từ để cấu trúc ý.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have improved cycling lanes to encourage biking. Additionally, more people cycle for exercise and to reduce pollution.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

No grammatical error: the student's repetition matches the examiner's question and uses correct past tense structure. Keep using 'Did you have' for past possession and 'when you were a child' as a correct time clause. No change needed.

× Do you think bites are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The error is a wrong word choice: 'bites' is a different noun (plural of 'bite') and makes the sentence meaningless in this context. The correct word is 'bikes' (plural of 'bike'). The grammar (present simple question) is correct. Suggestion: pay attention to pronunciation and minimal pairs so that 'bike' and 'bite' are not confused; when writing, check the intended noun: 'bike(s)' for bicycles.