Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is short and direct, which is fine, but to improve score you should expand with one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief example) and use a linking word to make it flow. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition. For example, explain why you wanted one and whether you eventually got it or not.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I really wanted one because my friends used to ride to the park every afternoon. As a result, I often watched them and borrowed bikes occasionally, although my parents couldn’t afford to buy me one at the time.

提案: Good direct answer and a simple reason. To raise your score, avoid informal words like “kinda” and add a specific detail or example (where or who uses bikes, for what purpose), using a linking word to connect ideas. Aim for clearer vocabulary and a slightly more structured response.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines because many people use them for short trips and commuting in both cities and rural areas. For example, I often see students and delivery workers riding bikes in the mornings, which shows they are a common and practical mode of transport.

× Yes, I do think that bicycles are kinda popular in the Philippines since I've seen so many people riding bicycle all around.

✓ Yes, I do think that bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines since I've seen so many people riding bicycles all around.

The sentence contains a quantifier/word choice issue: 'kinda' is informal; replace with 'quite' for appropriate register. Also 'riding bicycle' is incorrect: countable noun 'bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' after 'riding' when referring to many people. Use 'bicycles' to match the plural context. Suggestion: use 'quite' or 'fairly' in formal speech and ensure countable nouns agree in number with the context.