Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Give a direct response then add one or two brief supporting details (reason, memory or contrast). Keep it natural and within 3–5 sentences. Use linking words like "however", "but", or "because" if needed.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school with my friends. However, I remember borrowing a neighbour’s bike sometimes and feeling very excited.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific supporting details with linking words (for example: "because", "so", "for instance"). Mention who uses bikes and for what reasons to add specificity.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people find them cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, in my neighbourhood a lot of people cycle to work or to the market, especially during rush hour because it’s faster than driving.

× Yes, I lived, uh, I lived in I live in a near house.

✓ Yes, I live in a nearby house.

The student mixes past and present tenses and uses incorrect word order and word choice. 'I lived' (past) conflicts with the question about general present habit; use present tense 'I live'. 'A near house' is ungrammatical—use the adjective 'nearby' before the noun: 'a nearby house' or 'I live nearby.' Also remove repeated words. Suggestion: maintain consistent present tense for current living situation and use 'nearby' or 'near' correctly: 'I live in a nearby house.'

× My near house are are people bikes to work.

✓ In my neighborhood, people ride bikes to work.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'My near house' is incorrect noun phrase and 'are are' is a duplication. Subject-verb agreement and word choice are wrong—'people' (plural) needs a plural verb but the sentence structure is incorrect. Also 'bikes' as a verb is wrong; the correct verb is 'ride'. Rephrase to a natural English sentence describing the area: 'In my neighborhood, people ride bikes to work.' This fixes noun phrase, subject-verb agreement, and verb choice.