Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense, and give a brief reason or detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incorrect grammar like "I don't" for past situations and unclear phrases such as "I don't know how to buy."

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, my family usually walked or used public transport, so I never had the chance to learn how to buy or choose one. As a result, I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

提案: Answer directly and expand with specific reasons and cleaner linking words. Use more natural vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "motorbikes are very common"). Provide one or two concrete examples or comparisons to support your view and keep sentences concise.

例: Not really — regular bicycles aren’t very popular in my country, but motorbikes are. For example, most people prefer motorbikes for commuting because they are faster and more convenient in heavy traffic, so you see them everywhere in cities and towns.

× No, I don't because I don't know how to buy.

✓ No, I didn't, because I didn't know how to buy one.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so past tense should be used. 'I don't' is present; use 'I didn't'. Also 'I don't know how to buy' should be in past: 'I didn't know how to buy one.' Adding 'one' clarifies the object (a bike). Use consistent past tense for clarity.

× No, absolutely not. Maybe motorbike, because motorbike is very everywhere. In my place you can see motorbike.

✓ No, absolutely not. Maybe motorbikes, because motorbikes are everywhere. In my area you can see motorbikes.

Use plural 'motorbikes' to refer generally to the vehicle type (singular 'motorbike' is incorrect in these contexts). Subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'motorbikes' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. 'Very everywhere' is ungrammatical; use 'everywhere'. 'In my place' is awkward; 'in my area' or 'where I live' is more natural. Ensure consistent pluralization and correct verb agreement.