Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy, clarity and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice and verb forms, and use linking words to organize supporting details. Be specific about who uses bikes, why, and where (e.g., shared bikes, bike lanes). Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas. This is mainly because they are inexpensive and convenient for short journeys. For example, many students and office workers use shared-bike services to commute to school or work, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes that make cycling safer. As a result, cycling is a common and practical transport option for short trips.

× Well, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities because they are cheap and confident for short trips.

✓ Well, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

The student used the adjective 'confident' which does not fit the intended meaning. The appropriate adjective is 'convenient' to describe something suitable for short trips. Suggestion: replace incorrect adjectives with the correct one based on meaning; learn common collocations like 'convenient for short trips'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, many students and office workers who shared bikes to go to class or work and there are bike lanes is some.

✓ For example, many students and office workers share bikes to go to class or work, and there are some bike lanes.

This sentence has multiple structure errors: incorrect verb tense and form ('who shared' should be present-tense habitual 'share'), a misplaced relative clause, and an incorrect clause 'there are bike lanes is some'. The corrected version uses present simple to match general statement, removes the unnecessary 'who', and places 'some' correctly after 'are'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, keep clauses parallel with 'and', and position quantifiers like 'some' after the verb 'are'. Grammar problem type ID:26