Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã hiểu câu hỏi sai và phát âm/viết sai từ "bike" thành "back". Cần chú ý nghe và phát âm từ vựng cơ bản rõ ràng, và trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết nếu cần. Ví dụ cải thiện: trả lời có/không rõ ràng, nói thêm ai tặng, khi nào nhận, và cảm xúc kèm liên từ phù hợp.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a red one my parents bought for my birthday, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend, so I remember it fondly.

提案: Câu trả lời lặp lại và ngữ pháp sai (thiếu danh từ sau "my", số ít/những từ không đúng như "popular is motorbike"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, dùng liên từ (because, however) để giải thích, và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (thống kê, ví dụ về giao thông). Hạn chế độ dài tối đa 5 câu và tránh lặp ý.

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for convenience. For example, many families use motorbikes to commute to work and carry goods, and the city’s roads and traffic culture favour two-wheeled motor vehicles.

× Did you have a back when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student misheard or mistyped 'bike' as 'back.' This is a sentence structure/word-choice error: the noun 'back' does not fit the question context. Use the correct noun 'bike' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen carefully and repeat key words if unclear; check pronunciation and spelling of similar-sounding words. Note: This answer replicates the examiner's question correctly.

× Umm, I don't think bikes are popular in my.

✓ Umm, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is missing the noun 'country' after the possessive determiner 'my.' This is a sentence structure error: 'my' must be followed by a noun. Suggestion: include the noun after possessive determiners (my + country). Also ensure the plural 'bikes' matches 'are popular.'

× I don't think bike is popular in my country because my country popular is motorbike.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because motorcycles (or motorbikes) are more common.

There are multiple errors combined: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with 'are popular' (singular/plural issue). The clause 'my country popular is motorbike' is ungrammatical sentence structure; it should be 'motorcycles are more common' or 'motorbikes are more popular.' Suggestion: use plural nouns with plural verbs (bikes are) and form a clear clause: 'because motorcycles are more common' or 'because motorbikes are more popular in my country.'