Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ студента был несвязным и непонятным. Нужно давать прямой ответ на вопрос (да или нет), затем при необходимости добавлять 1–2 предложения с конкретными деталями (например, какой это был велосипед, как часто вы на нём ездили, с кем и где). Используйте связки (for example, because, so, when) и ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений, чтобы звучать естественно.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every day after school. For example, I often rode with my older brother to the park because it was a safe place to practice.

提案: Ответ не понятен и не отвечает на вопрос. Дайте прямое мнение (yes/no или a short statement), затем объясните причину с конкретными примерами (e.g., traffic, bike lanes, cost, culture). Используйте связующие слова (because, however, for instance) и не более 3 предложений всего.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, city councils have built several bike lanes in recent years, so more commuters choose cycling instead of driving.

× Uchibabil, Villa. Sipiacca, Databilly, Buncombe.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original utterance is non-grammatical and appears to be nonsense words; it does not form a coherent sentence answering the examiner's question. The corrected sentence uses an appropriate subject 'I', past tense verb 'had' to match the past time reference 'when you were a child', and the noun 'a bicycle' in singular form. Suggestion: produce full, meaningful sentences with subject + verb + object and use past tense for past situations.

× To doomers Felicibe de Popularnova estrena.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country.

The original utterance contains non-English words and lacks proper grammatical structure. The question asks for a present opinion about current popularity, so present simple is appropriate: 'I think bicycles are popular'. The correction uses subject 'I', present simple verb 'think', and plural noun 'bicycles' to match general statement. Suggestion: answer opinion questions with present simple and use clear English vocabulary; ensure subject-verb-object order and correct pluralization for general facts.