Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn cần nói trực tiếp, rõ ràng và ngắn gọn; sửa ngữ pháp thì quá khứ, tránh tiếng Ồ (uh), và bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: dùng thì quá khứ (had), nêu ai cho bạn xe và mô tả ngắn về chiếc xe hoặc cảm giác của bạn. Cố gắng không quá 3 câu để giữ tự nhiên.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I remember riding it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với lý do rõ ràng, dùng thì hiện tại đơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Nên thay "not popular anymore" bằng cấu trúc chính xác và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về thói quen di chuyển hoặc số lượng phương tiện. Giữ 2–3 câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country nowadays because most people prefer motorbikes for their speed and convenience. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to travel quickly between work and home.

× Yes I have uh, when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The speaker is describing possession in the past, so the past tense 'had' is required rather than present 'have'. Also 'a child' needs the article 'a'. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations (I had) and include articles for singular countable nouns (a child).

× I have my opinion by my parents both for me.

✓ I got the bike from my parents; they gave it to me.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and prepositions ('have my opinion by my parents both for me' is unclear). The intended meaning is likely that the parents provided the bike. Use 'got... from' or 'was given by' and clear subject pronouns. Suggestion: rephrase into active or passive voice correctly (I got it from my parents / It was given to me by my parents).

× I don't think in my country by a not popular anymore because people use motorbike everywhere.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country anymore because people use motorbikes everywhere.

The sentence has several issues: incorrect placement of 'in', wrong article and word order. Use the modal/negation structure 'I don't think' followed by a clause 'bikes are not popular'. Also plural 'motorbikes' fits general statement. Suggestion: follow 'I don't think' with a full clause and use correct word order: subject + verb + complement.

× It's save time and save energy for different activity.

✓ They save time and energy for different activities.

'It's save' is ungrammatical; use plural subject 'they' (referring to motorbikes or bikes) with present simple 'save'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' for general meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.