Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words (e.g., "yes, I did" + reason or memory). Keep it natural and within 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my parents bought me a small blue bicycle for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

提案: Your reply repeated and mispronounced the question instead of giving an opinion. Answer directly with your view, then support it with a clear reason and a linking word (e.g., "Yes, I think so because..."). Use accurate vocabulary ("bikes" not "buys") and provide a specific example or comparison.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys in towns. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/response error: the sentence lacks the required subject and past-tense verb to form a proper answer. Correct response uses past simple 'had' to match the past-time reference 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: answer directly using past simple (Yes/No + subject + past verb), e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys' which is a spelling/word-choice error causing the sentence to be meaningless. This is a sentence structure/lexical mistake rather than a grammatical tense error. Correct word is 'bikes' to match the topic. Also ensure verb 'do you think' is appropriate present-tense for current general opinion. Suggestion: replace 'buys' with 'bikes' and keep the question form: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'