Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、時態一致並避免拖詞（如 “umm”）。開頭可直接用過去時描述歷史經驗，然後用一兩句具體細節（例如學習的場景、年齡或父親教學的方法）來豐富內容，注意句子數量不要超過五句並使用連接詞使語意更流暢。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about seven, and my father patiently held the seat and ran alongside me until I found my balance. After a few days of practice I could ride around our neighbourhood confidently.

提案: 回答需注意語法（主謂一致、單複數）和用詞準確，減少重複表達。建議先直接回答然後給出兩三個具體原因或一個具體例子，用連接詞（such as, because, therefore）保持連貫。句子不宜過長或重複。

例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most urban roads are dominated by cars. As a result, there is little safe space for cyclists, and many people prefer motorcycles or public transport instead.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句使用現在時態“have”但問話是過去式“Did you have...?”，所以應使用過去式“had”。建議注意時態一致：回答過去經驗時使用過去式。

× When I was a child, umm, when I was young, I didn't know how to ride a bike, but my father taught me to ride bike and he was very patient.

✓ When I was a child, umm, when I was young, I didn't know how to ride a bike, but my father taught me to ride a bike and he was very patient.

句中“taught”是正確的過去式，但“to ride bike”缺少冠詞“a”。在可數名詞單數前需用不定冠詞“a”。建議記住英文中單數可數名詞前通常需要冠詞或限定詞。

× Uh, I don't think bike is popular in my country because the road there are many cars in the road and people do not have space to ride bikes.

✓ Uh, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are many cars on the roads and people do not have space to ride bikes.

原句錯誤："bike is" 主語應為複數"bikes are"來表示泛指；此外“the road there are many cars in the road”語序和介詞使用錯誤，應為“there are many cars on the roads”。建議：泛指事物用複數（bikes），並使用固定結構“there are + 複數名詞”；表示在道路上用介詞“on”，且“road”作一般複數時用“roads”。

× So this means that the roads are crowded for people to ride bikes.

✓ So this means that the roads are too crowded for people to ride bikes.

原句缺少程度副詞導致語義不完整，正常表達應為“too crowded”表示“過於擁擠以致不能騎車”。建議使用合適的副詞（如 too, very）來明確程度，並注意固定結構“too ... to ...”。