Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it's very short and offers no supporting details. To improve, give a brief topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, comparison, or a short example). Use a linking word if you add another sentence. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we rarely had space to store one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike on weekends, and I learned to ride it around the park.

提案: Your answer answers the question but is brief and contains a small grammar and vocabulary issue (“using bike” should be “using bikes” or “riding bikes”). To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details (where and why bikes are popular, who uses them) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling to work, and in suburban areas families ride bikes in parks, which makes cycling very visible and common.

× I think so because I can see a lot of people using bike.

✓ I think so because I can see a lot of people using bikes.

The noun 'bike' is countable and here refers to many individuals each using one or more bicycles, so it should be plural 'bikes'. This is a singular/plural quantifier error: 'a lot of' requires the noun to be plural when referring to countable items. Suggestion: use 'bikes' after 'a lot of', or rephrase to 'a lot of people who ride bikes' or 'many people ride bikes.'