Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Lỗi chính ở phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn đã viết sai từ 'bike' thành 'buy' và cấu trúc thì không đúng ('you're were' sai). Cần chú ý phát âm từ vựng quan trọng và sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ. Ngoài ra, khi trả lời, hãy đưa câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, không quá 5 câu tổng cộng.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a simple red bicycle with a small basket, and I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon. I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

提案: Lại sai từ từ 'bikes' thành 'buys' (chỉ lỗi nghe/viết) và câu hỏi bạn lặp lại từ người kiểm tra thay vì trả lời. Khi trả lời, hãy nêu quan điểm trực tiếp rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể và ví dụ nếu có. Sử dụng liên từ (because, so, however) để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students ride to school, which makes cycling convenient and common.

× Did you have a buy when you're were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'buy' (a verb) instead of 'bike' (a noun) and wrote 'you're were' which is incorrect. The correct past question form is 'Did you have...' followed by the noun 'a bike'. 'You're were' mixes 'you are' and past tense 'were'; use only 'were'. Suggestion: replace 'buy' with 'bike' and use 'you were' or simply 'you' after 'Did' as in the corrected sentence.

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys' (plural of the verb/noun 'buy' which is not correct here) instead of 'bikes' (plural noun). The question asks about the popularity of bicycles, so use the plural noun 'bikes'. Suggestion: use the noun 'bike' in plural form when asking about general popularity: 'bikes'. This fixes both the incorrect word and plural noun usage.