Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите повторения и используйте грамматические формы последовательно; начните с чёткого ответного предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с временными маркерами и конкретными деталями. Избегайте тавтологии («I I», «so much fun», «in the past») и исправьте порядок слов и времена: используйте Past Simple для описания привычек в прошлом. Можно добавить связки («When I was young», «We often», «Because»), чтобы ответ был плавным и логичным.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my neighbour after school, and we would explore the nearby park together. Those afternoons were great because we felt free and spent hours racing and fixing the bike when it broke.

提案: Уберите повторение фразы «I don't think so» и сформулируйте причину ясно и грамматически корректно; используйте связующие слова («however», «but», «although») и уточняющие детали (кто именно и когда катается на велосипеде). Исправьте количество и времена («on weekdays» вместо «often weekdays») и добавьте пример или сравнение, чтобы обосновать своё мнение.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Although a minority of people cycle for leisure or short commutes, most prefer cars or motorcycles because public cycling infrastructure is limited. For example, many people only ride bikes on weekends in parks rather than using them for daily travel.

× We have so much fun together in the past by riding a bike.

✓ We had so much fun together in the past riding our bikes.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' but refers to a past time 'in the past', so tense mismatch (Present tense issue ID 6) and pluralization: 'a bike' suggests one bike while both rode—use plural 'bikes' or 'our bikes'. Also 'by riding a bike' is awkward; use 'riding our bikes' or simply 'riding bikes'. Suggestion: keep past tense 'had' and match plurality with 'our bikes'.

× I always rode it with my friend who was my neighbor.

✓ I always rode it with my friend who was my neighbor.

Sentence is grammatically correct but ensure pronoun 'it' clearly refers to 'a bike' (singular). No change needed; maintain past tense 'rode'.

× I don't think so because it's not so well known in my country, but some people enjoy riding bike when they are free and often weekdays.

✓ I don't think so because cycling is not very well known in my country, but some people enjoy riding bikes in their free time and often on weekdays.

Multiple issues: 'it's not so well known' is acceptable but 'cycling' or 'bicycling' is more natural than 'it' (pronoun ambiguity). 'Riding bike' needs plural or article ('riding bikes' or 'riding a bike'). Prepositional errors: use 'in their free time' not 'when they are free', and include 'on weekdays' for time expression. Also 'often weekdays' is incorrect—use 'often on weekdays'. Maintain present tense for general statement.