Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь отвечать прямо и связно: начните с простого утверждения о факте, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные детали (когда, как часто, кто дал велосипед). Избегайте грамматических ошибок во временах и местоимениях, используйте простые конструкции: I had / I used it for / My aunt gave it to me. Не говорите слишком длинно и бессвязно — максимум 3–4 предложений. Также постарайтесь использовать связки (for example, because, so) для логики и ясности.

例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My aunt gave it to me, and I used it for about six months until she needed it back. Because she often borrowed it, I didn't ride it very often.

提案: Отвечайте ясно и приведите конкретные причины и примеры. Начните с общего утверждения, затем поддержите его 2–3 конкретными аргументами (экономичность, удобство в городе, примеры групп людей, которые их используют). Улучшите грамматику: используйте множественное число (bicycles are), правильные конструкции (they don't use gas / they save fuel), и переходные слова (because, for example, for short trips). Максимум 3–4 предложения будет достаточно.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. They are cheap and save fuel, so many people use them for short trips to work or the market. For example, students and delivery workers often prefer bikes because they are fast and inexpensive.

× Yes, I have, but it wasn't I got such a big time.

✓ Yes, I had one, but I didn't use it very often.

The student mixes present perfect 'have' with past context; the situation refers to childhood so simple past 'had' is correct. Also 'wasn't I got such a big time' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I didn't use it very often' to express low frequency in the past. Suggestion: use past simple for past facts and 'didn't' + base verb for past negatives.

× My childhood was for my using like maybe half year, like you know, not too much.

✓ I used it in my childhood for maybe half a year, not for very long.

The original uses 'was for my using' which wrongly combines 'be' with a gerund. The action occurred in the past so use past simple 'used' and an appropriate duration expression 'for half a year'. Keep time expressions next to the verb. Suggestion: say 'I used it for about half a year.'

× I use it because my one of the aunt has had the time to bike and they pass me.

✓ I used it because one of my aunts had a bike and she let me use it.

Pronoun and noun order is incorrect ('my one of the aunt') and tense should be past ('used', 'had'). 'They pass me' is incorrect: a singular aunt requires 'she' and the correct verb is 'let me use it' or 'gave it to me to use'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and use clear pronouns: 'one of my aunts' and 'she let me use it.'

× So I used to park.

✓ So I used it often./So I used it a lot.

'Used to park' is incomplete and unclear; likely the student meant 'used it' (used the bike). 'Used to' followed by a verb indicates a habitual past action but must be followed by the action: 'used to ride it' or 'used to use it.' Suggestion: replace with 'I used to ride it' or 'I used it a lot.'

× Yes, bike is one of the popular transport in our country.

✓ Yes, the bike is one of the popular means of transport in our country.

Countable noun 'bike' needs an article 'the' when referring generally as a category, and 'transport' as an uncountable concept should be 'means of transport' or 'modes of transport'. Suggestion: use 'the bike' and 'means of transport.'

× We use it when we want to go some places or just arrive some places and it's one of the economical transport because it's tend to take a lot of gas or oil.

✓ We use it when we want to go to places or just get to places, and it's one of the most economical means of transport because it doesn't use much petrol or oil.

Problems: 'go some places' needs preposition 'to'; 'arrive some places' should be 'get to places'; 'one of the economical transport' needs superlative form and correct noun phrase 'one of the most economical means of transport'; 'it's tend to take' is ungrammatical — 'it doesn't use much' is appropriate. Also match tense and agreement. Suggestion: use 'go to places', 'get to places', and 'doesn't use much petrol.'

× So it's one of the cheapest.

✓ So it's one of the cheapest options.

While grammatically short, adding 'options' clarifies the comparison group. The phrase 'one of the cheapest' is acceptable but usually followed by the noun being compared. Suggestion: specify what it's cheap among, e.g., 'options' or 'means of transport.'