Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，未给出任何信息。要直接回答问题并提供一到两句补充细节，例如什么时候有、骑车的频率或与谁一起骑。尽量使用主题句开头并用连接词（例如 because, so, when）使表达连贯。保持不超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it to school almost every day. Because my neighbourhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing tricks with my friends on weekends.

提案: 回答直接但信息有限，句子有语法和用词不够地道的问题（例如“by the bikes in the road”不自然）。应给出更具体的原因、场景或对比，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。注意使用正确的介词和自然表达（e.g. “children riding bikes on the road”）。保持回答清晰简短，最多5句。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. Many people use them for short trips and children often ride them to school, especially in suburban areas. Also, because cycling is cheap and good exercise, you can see crowded bike lanes during rush hour.

× Sometimes I look at the children by the bikes in the road.

✓ Sometimes I look at the children on the bikes in the road.

句子中介词“by”用法不当。英文中描述人骑在自行车上通常用“on the bikes”，而“by the bikes”表示“在自行车旁边”，与原意不符。建议把“by”改为“on”以准确表达“骑自行车”的意思；此外若想表达“在路上”，可保留“in the road”或更自然地说“on the road”。