Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Focus on clarity, correct tense and grammar, and keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.”), then give a brief reason using correct structures and linking words (e.g., “because I was afraid of riding”). Avoid unclear fragments like “adventure thing” and correct vocabulary errors (e.g., “pie” → “bike”).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding. However, I became more confident as a teenager, so I learned to ride occasionally. Now I enjoy cycling for short trips and exercise.

提案: Give a clear direct answer, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., “ride a bike” instead of “right reading a bike”). Provide concrete reasons or examples (commuting, cost, environment) to strengthen the response.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save money and avoid traffic, and in some cities the government has built bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I'm afraid of riding and. Adventure thing. But now I'm I like pie.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I was afraid of riding and adventure activities. But now I like bikes.

Grammar problem type IDs: 16 and 26. The original contains sentence fragments and incorrect conjunction use: 'because I'm afraid of riding and. Adventure thing.' is fragmented and mixes present tense with past context. Also 'I'm I like pie' seems to be typing errors and wrong word 'pie' instead of 'bike'. Corrections: use past tense 'I was afraid' to match 'When I was a child', combine fragments into a single clause with 'and' followed by a noun phrase 'adventure activities', and replace the garbled clause with 'But now I like bikes.' Suggestion: ensure tense consistency, avoid sentence fragments, and proofread for typos. Use complete clauses after conjunctions. Grammar problem type ID: 16 and 26

× In my country bikes are popular. Popular because some generations like right reading a bike.

✓ In my country, bikes are popular because some generations enjoy riding bikes.

Grammar problem type IDs: 1 and 26. The original has a sentence fragment 'Popular because...' and incorrect word choice 'right reading a bike' which appears to be a typo for 'riding a bike'. Also 'some generations' is acceptable but the sentence needs a complete structure: combine into one sentence and use the verb 'enjoy' with the gerund 'riding'. Correction fixes word order and plurality ('bikes' consistent) and removes the fragment. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by connecting dependent clauses to main clauses, choose correct verbs (ride/riding), and proofread for typos.