Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is mostly unintelligible and does not respond to the question. Give a clear direct response (topic sentence) stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and limit to about 1–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. For example, I received a red bicycle for my eighth birthday and rode it to school and the park every day. Because I practiced often, I became confident riding on busy sidewalks.

提案: The answer is unclear and doesn't directly address the question. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/It depends), then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and many students and office workers ride to save time and money.

× Did you? VAVRA. Like when when you wear a. Schedule.

✓ No, I didn't. Vavra. I mean, like when you were a child, when you had a schedule.

The original reply is fragmented and contains repetitions and unclear words, so it lacks a coherent sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type 26). The speaker uses 'Did you?' which repeats the examiner's question and then fragments ('Like when when you wear a. Schedule.'). Correcting requires forming complete clauses and using the past tense 'were' to match 'when you were a child.' Suggestions: remove repeated 'Did you?', eliminate filler fragments, combine ideas into a complete sentence, use past-tense verb forms to refer to childhood, and place modifiers (like 'when you were a child') next to the verb they modify.

× Do you? Tank bikes are popular in your country.

✓ Yes. I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original reply includes 'Do you?' which echoes the examiner and 'Tank' which appears to be a misheard word; the sentence is not a grammatically correct response (Grammar Problem Type 26). The reply should directly answer the question and use 'are' for plural 'bikes' and the possessive 'my country' to indicate the speaker's country. Suggestions: remove echoing 'Do you?', replace unclear words with 'I think', and use 'are popular in my country' to form a clear, subject-verb-complement sentence.